What do you guys think about this thing I wrote. I wrote it when I was kinda bored. if I used bad grammer please dont make a point of it. I realize its kinda long but nobodys forcing you to read it.

It all started one time when god made man and earth, sublime. God made a garden for them not to sin in, but knew all along man was all for it. Sin fell upon man following gods mighty plan. Down comes Gods smitting hand. Man is now cursed to walk the earth. Plagued from sin straight from birth.Gods power becomes denied by man. So God floods the Earth to prove what he can.

He washes the earth clean of sin only for it to start the cycle all over again. Then man rises from the lowering tides only to take sin as their brides. God gets upset and makes a new plan. He decides to send his only son to man. Mabey this will make them learn that its faith in him they should earn.

God sends jesus to them in a town called bethlahem. Where he will be raised and when he's wiser, Praised. To some he is Gods son to be hailed, but to others he deserves on a cross nailed. From this god decides they should have learned. Praise in God or in fire you get burned.

From this point on god lies in slumber, while mankinds sins grow in number. God plans that judgement day will soon be here. Only then will mankinds sinful ways be clear. To this day many were killed in his name. To the point where it seems like gods only fun game. Which side will have the last laugh when their both fighting on gods behalf.

Finally when the smoke is clear Gods judgment day will finally apear. Many people worldwide will be shouting why, while others wont care and just get High. Down Gods plagues come, While science tries to explain where from. Peoples lives start on fire while they look for who to blame and what lawyer to hire.

Some people say mankind has never lost faith in god while others just accept and nod. Preachers start yelling in the streets that mankind is witnessing ends meets. I yell out the window "shut up you stupid hacks!", but they dont so I turn the TV's vollume to Max. Then God shouted at me "You athiests are the worst of all." "How does it feel to be the cause of mans fall?"

Then God casted a mighty fireshower only to be brushed off by me along with "God you have no power!" "Please just let me be!" " Im just trying to watch TV" "Now if you could please just begone, Hurry up my favorite show is comming on!" Then when everyone realized from their screaming that the end they were only dreaming.

I walk out into the streets asking why none used reason, but then they chased me down yelling treason. The preacher called me evil and bad, but after hearing this it just made me sad. It was just a preacher that said judgment day would come. I realized its not god thats dumb only the organized religion it came from. People its okay to believe in God, but please just don't sit, listen and nod.

Thats a major cause of the worlds Hate and leaves a rising death toll at an astounding rate.

Edit: made easier to read

[This message has been edited by Sommers88 (edited 07-27-2006).]