So I wrote this song for a spanish class I'm taking, and would like some critique on my grammar, etc. Obviously I have no accent marks and such, so ignore that aspect, but do conjugations and tenses look well.

No puedo vivir
Sin tu
Porque tu estas que me haces
Feliz
Yo canto debajo el sol
Cerca del mar
En el verano
Estoy feliz
Pero ahora
El pasado esta cercano
A mi
En el otono cuando las hojas
Estan rojo y estan caido
A la tierra y la playa
Esta muy bonita como tu
Mi ruca es mi vida
El invierno esta frio
Y triste sin ella
Pero en la primavera
Cuando el sol es brillando
Mi ojos estan abierto
Como tu brazos
Como tu corazon

Yeah its pretty sappy, but whatever, I'm hoping to win my professor over with my godlike guitar playing skills.

I don't think I've posted much here, so sorry if I'm breaking any rules. I'm assuming this is the right forum for this but I'm often mistaken about that and people tend to flip a shit when I am. Well, at least in BLTC. I wonder if that correlates to the drug consumption/being strung out...


Oi, and a really bad (but true) riddle...

What do you call someone who speaks three languages? Two? One?