http://www.mediafire.com/file/wvlhztyjiyl/FINAL ROUGH - IF NOT FOREVER.mp3

it was just messing araound high but trying to do it seriously, and quietly since I had other people asleep here :) it was just some stuff I had written down but I thought it was a poem that sounded kind of good in -rap-form and there's alre.. nvm here check it out i hope it will not disappoint, my tracks are labeled wrong the song is not a freestyle. here's a stupid fucked up freestyle though =]

http://www.mediafire.com/file/nmyzmzmdyqy/freestyle wtf was i thinking.mp3

The first one would actually be pretty cool if you did it like The Books, it kinda reminded me of them. I dunno what you call it or how you would do it but thats just my two cents.

The beat was a little stale too.

The sound of the pages turning was kinda cool though.

overall

4/10

Thanks for looking at it, i expected as many responses but you to be like 'fuck you and your mother my time is so important i'll never say shit to your face' :)

yeah it was really shitty i'd do it better if I wasn't incredibly sick and it wasn't so late :( but the best freeware program for recording is probably Audacity, I have 1.2 but it might be newer now.. and I use a standard radioshack mic but we have done serious stuff with this rediculous excuse for a studio.. as well as prefessional demos but I didn't want to dedicate the material to a band yet idk it should be a cool song. thanks again for looking at it i'm adding you as a friend on this new friend thing they got.

Thanks for looking at it, i expected as many responses but you to be like 'fuck you and your mother my time is so important i'll never say shit to your face' :)

yeah it was really shitty i'd do it better if I wasn't incredibly sick and it wasn't so late :( but the best freeware program for recording is probably Audacity, I have 1.2 but it might be newer now.. and I use a standard radioshack mic but we have done serious stuff with this rediculous excuse for a studio.. as well as prefessional demos but I didn't want to dedicate the material to a band yet idk it should be a cool song. thanks again for looking at it i'm adding you as a friend on this new friend thing they got.

My pleasure, lol.