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harry_hardcore_hoedown
2008-10-16, 13:15
African
Infant
Death
Syndrome

I also have a haiku:

Baby in the pool
Jesus Christ, I think it's dead
Never learned to swim

Be kind with your criticism, as these are my first attempts at poetry. If this thread gets to ten pages I'll post more.

Anarchist88
2008-10-17, 03:00
niiiiice :p almost laughed at the AIDS thing, i kinda chuckled at the haiku :cool: the words wouldnt be funny if it was in free form, but the fact that it was a haiku put it over the edge lol:D