Cut some lines, feeling fine, taste the blood when I cough
Pack the bowl, take a drag, burn a bag to get off
Cook a hit, boot that shit, jack the vein and burn out
Wakin' up, flick the bic, do a hit to kill doubt
Daylight stings, wear my shades, seems the world's a blur
Drink a beer, noon is near, call my dude for the cure
Hit the crib, smoke a cig, feel the clock running low
Acid hits, get a grip, force myself to go slow
Cut some lines, feeling fine, taste the blood when I cough

Poems about drugs. How... original. What a concept: you doing drugs. It's sure to be a big success. Especially when it puts such a new and imaginative spin on doing drugs. There's nothing here that has ever been said before. You should write a whole book of these as quick as you can, and then run, run I say, to the publisher's office, before someone steals your work and beats you to it.

Poems about drugs. How... original. What a concept: you doing drugs. It's sure to be a big success. Especially when it puts such a new and imaginative spin on doing drugs. There's nothing here that has ever been said before. You should write a whole book of these as quick as you can, and then run, run I say, to the publisher's office, before someone steals your work and beats you to it.

O wow, you scribble a few paragraphs of cynical views down about road kill and over prescriptions....no ones ever done That before...wait...hmmm.
Title is sarcasm renob. fucking take time to think or don't bother to try to be witty.
BTW, FTFO I've been published

O wow, you scribble a few paragraphs of cynical views down about road kill and over prescriptions....no ones ever done That before...wait...hmmm.
Title is sarcasm renob. fucking take time to think or don't bother to try to be witty.
BTW, FTFO I've been published

There was nothing in the poem to make me think that the title was sarcastic. If it was meant that way I completely missed the point. It's either due to my misinterpretation of something obvious or your lack of actually including anything to hint at it. If it's the former I sincerely apologise, I have a tendency to miss the point sometimes.

If you have a problem with my writing I'd appreciate it if you put it in the correct thread, and leave it out of a discussion it has nothing to do with.

eh, I actually like your writing. was a cheap shot. guess the title can be misleading...I never know what to title them and the title came from a line in "confessions". I get that alot though about titling. "it all starts with..." always gets good reviews except the complaints about titling. my bad Malk, been a long week at work.
Though on the note of titles, when I read this It is a fast paced read, ending with the beginning is jsut seems to me in my head to get faster and faster in a cycle until It seems to scream. but that might just be from my having lived it that it seems to be a desperate scream and obviously pointing to the sarcastic title

eh, I actually like your writing. was a cheap shot. guess the title can be misleading...I never know what to title them and the title came from a line in "confessions". I get that alot though about titling. "it all starts with..." always gets good reviews except the complaints about titling. my bad Malk, been a long week at work.
Though on the note of titles, when I read this It is a fast paced read, ending with the beginning is jsut seems to me in my head to get faster and faster in a cycle until It seems to scream. but that might just be from my having lived it that it seems to be a desperate scream and obviously pointing to the sarcastic title

I was a massive dick man. Sorry about that. I didn't even really offer any feedback in the first post, and if someone replied with a bullshit comment like that on something I'd written, I'd have reacted the same way you did.

I read some of your other stuff, and I saw that line in Confessions and it made a lot more sense with this one. The impression I got when I read this one was "Drugs/Self-destructive habits r kool." Yeah, when you explain it like you just did, it makes a lot more sense as well, but I don't really know how you'd get that across in the poem. Maybe most people get it, I don't know. I read "Her" though. I liked that one a lot. I guess I can relate to that one better than this. Again man, I'm sorry I was a douchebag, there was really no reason for it and it didn't help anyone out.

Maybe most people get it, I don't know.

About the only people that get the real meaning sit in NA weekly too. It's cool man, tempers flare and sarcasm abouts in &T.

This thread warms my heart. :)

then bump my other shit, make an acolyte feel welcome

so un-totse like

This thread warms my heart. :)

agreed! never on totse have i seen this happen...a mature apology by both people and a reasonable reconciliation? not flamewars and petty bullshit??? i like it.