I met my soul mate buying dog food
We struck up conversation about it
Being fit for human consumption
Just in case someone is so depraved.
I gestured at a homeless girl
Huddled outside with her dog
A fitting excuse.

Is it just me or are you missing something outta that.
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I had planned on adding more and better than that drivel but have been busy.

I had planned on adding more and better than that drivel but have been busy.
Was kidding dude! :rolleyes: although nothing corresponded to ocean creatures, I still liked it! but what was the gesture and what was the fitting excuse?
Anyways! this part is a good start....
I met my soul mate buying dog food
We struck up conversation about it
Being fit for human consumptionA world of dysfunction within a metaphor of words

A distinct twinge of interest formed amongst two individuals
like two souls entwined within each self
binding towards a relationship that could?.... or may not happen
But without pursuing?...may not eventuate at all....

You can work off that shit, and get laid every fuckin time. :D

As it is, I really really enjoyed this piece.

Kudos.

It's the style of writing that not only inspires me, but that I want to recreate. Well done.

I'd like to develop more on the idea of people eating dog food.
Thank you kindly for words of encouragement.

I'd like to develop more on the idea of people eating dog food.
lolz!^

I met my soul mate buying dog food
We struck up conversation about it
Being fit for human consumption
A world of dysfunction within a metaphor of words

A distinct twinge of interest formed amongst two individuals
like two souls entwined within each self
binding towards a relationship that could?.... or may not happen
But without pursuing?...may not eventuate at all....

But if such existence does not ensue
we could always eat dog food

Yeah? :rolleyes:

Top notch.