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Moonius
2008-10-31, 13:48
This kind of has to be sung for effect.



Unequivocal divisible
Inquisitive and quizzical
Where are you from?

Trivial relivial
The so sequestered physical
Where am I from?

Experimental dogma fable
Scientific ration tables
Where did we form?

Spontaneously compulsive walls
Obstructed and produced with longs
Where did he go?

Burn the paper read the news
Who said I was being shrewd?
Here, here I'm not.

Screaming loudly they aren't heard
For they make noise that seems absurd
Your, you're a freak.

On and on can go this song
But here it ends for I am drawn
Hi, hi to you.


The thing that bothers me most is the last line

dawk
2008-10-31, 13:56
pure meth motivated ramble

ªÞe×
2008-10-31, 21:21
jazzy and fresh. The only problem is the last three lines, they end too abruptly after the previous stanza set up a nice follow on.

The Methematician
2008-11-01, 14:26
pure meth motivated ramble

by meth did you mean meth-amphetamine or meth-ematician ?:confused::confused: