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Toothlessjoe
2008-11-20, 17:41
I have researched your name over the past
few years and I do not regret to say

that you are non-existent.

I'm lying, of course.

I would have hoped that
somewhere in the world
someone with your name
would have built this

reputation

on the life-expectancy of lab rats
or perhaps a practical approach to

raising an autistic child

something, something, something
to know

you were more
than what

I had.

Gorloche
2008-11-22, 13:19
Your work grows more punchy and taut with each distillation. I enjoy you most when you feel confident enough to give a short, simple, direct statement. It really feels like your pieces "earn" those moments.

"I'm lying, of course" is probably my favorite line from you so far. I love how it works here.

This whole thing makes me excited to see what your next one may be.

Toothlessjoe
2008-11-23, 10:24
Luckily for you this is merely part 1. I'm working on a second part as we speak. Probably be up later or in the next few days.