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thequeerdeer
2008-11-20, 19:18
So I've written a magazine article. I talk about how big market teams in MLB (New York, Boston, etc.) use their access to a large fan base and corporate sponsorship to make absurd amounts of money. They then buy themselves the best free agents on the market, while teams such as Milwaukee, Kansas City, and Colorado don't have the money to disregard the luxury tax. I then propose a salary cap system as a solution, and how it would work.

As my working title I used:

Robin Hood: MIA

The girl that peer edited it said "umm, I don't really get it? Like, idk what the title means." Should I just give the ditz a big "fuck you" or does she know what she's talking about and it really does suck?

Malkog
2008-11-20, 23:50
So I've written a magazine article. I talk about how big market teams in MLB (New York, Boston, etc.) use their access to a large fan base and corporate sponsorship to make absurd amounts of money. They then buy themselves the best free agents on the market, while teams such as Milwaukee, Kansas City, and Colorado don't have the money to disregard the luxury tax. I then propose a salary cap system as a solution, and how it would work.

As my working title I used:

Robin Hood: MIA

The girl that peer edited it said "umm, I don't really get it? Like, idk what the title means." Should I just give the ditz a big "fuck you" or does she know what she's talking about and it really does suck?

Yo queerdeer. I think she might just be dumb. It makes sense. I didn't read/compute what your you article is actually about but I understand what the title means. Does she know what MIA stands for?

thequeerdeer
2008-11-21, 01:27
Yo queerdeer. I think she might just be dumb. It makes sense. I didn't read/compute what your you article is actually about but I understand what the title means. Does she know what MIA stands for?

idk her she was just at the writing center in the library. i'd tap dat shit but shes ugly as fuck. i still might.