Her foot taps in a perfect four count,
a beautiful time signature in converse
shoes with headphones the size of
cantaloupes cut in half and suction
cupped to each ear,
bleating like a snowy sheep
dying at the hands of its Shepard.

just wondering, was this making fun of metal music or not :confused: either way, i liked it

I like the illustration of stereotypes through the bleakness (or perhaps I'm feeling such?) and the imagery. Something doesn't grab me though.

Enjoyable all the same.

just wondering, was this making fun of metal music or not :confused: either way, i liked it

No I'm not... I love metal :)

I'm just describing how it makes me feel.

No I'm not... I love metal :)

I'm just describing how it makes me feel.

same here. but i couldnt really put my feelings toward it in a poem. well, ive never tried, so i wouldnt know. but anyways, its a good poem