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bangbangsilverhammer
2008-12-11, 08:43
I cracked my head
open, on the kitchen floor
to prove to you
that I had brains.
Like an egg,
I spilled out.
All of me, yolk and
all, crept through
the cracked linoleum
slipping under the refrigerator.
And my last thought
was to clean the floor
in case of roaches.

parkus
2008-12-11, 08:45
I hope you got your head seeing to after your fall.

Toothlessjoe
2008-12-14, 20:35
Really enjoyed this.

You should write in this vein more.

---Beany---
2008-12-15, 19:11
I puffed da weed
To get me high
My friend did sigh
I wondered why

Not enough tuck
not enough nip
That rolled up roach
Had stuck to my lip

bangbangsilverhammer
2008-12-16, 11:15
Thanks.

---Beany---, good one. lol

---Beany---
2008-12-16, 15:21
Cheers. That's the kind of roaches I thought you meant.

bangbangsilverhammer
2008-12-16, 20:54
Cheers. That's the kind of roaches I thought you meant.

No, that would be a happier poem.