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BloodShyne
2009-01-07, 19:48
Tic tic tic here we go again alone in my room I sit surrounded by sin.
666 time to feed the demons once again...amphetamine's take my soul amen.
Incenerate my urn in front of everyone I wish to leave nothing just as I come.
I'm haunted and psychotic my gardian angel turned demonic and tryed to strangle me with it's halo.
But this ain't xbox I grabbed him by the wings and ripped his head off like microsoft meet firefox.
I'v upgraded by being degraded I no longer need love I have self hatred.

Only the real no more fakeness suddenly everything seems so dark and tainted.
Colors are dull and faded I spilled bleach on my soul and it evaporated.
Every line I type is another kick in the teeth.
I'll stay in my shell like a sword in it's sheath and still cut bone deep.
My words are sharp enough to give you paper cut from this computer screen.
Talk is cheap and most people are sheep they only follow when you lead and fall apart when you leave.




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http://bloodypoetshynes.blogspot.com/

Anarchist88
2009-01-07, 20:22
amazing. very good flow. its like evey line hits home. i can imagine it being a very good song :D

Pringles
2009-01-08, 04:24
My words are sharp enough to give you paper cut from this computer screen.

Thats my favorite line. Very fuckin good job.;)

BloodShyne
2009-01-08, 05:49
Thats my favorite line. Very fuckin good job.;)Thank you so much your comment gives me inspiration

BloodShyne
2009-01-08, 06:01
amazing. very good flow. its like evey line hits home. i can imagine it being a very good song :Dthanks alot my writing is often misunderstood and thats one of my writings that really means something to me I can't belive people like it...I wish nothing but the best to you Anarchist88

Anarchist88
2009-01-09, 01:04
thanks alot my writing is often misunderstood and thats one of my writings that really means something to me I can't belive people like it...I wish nothing but the best to you Anarchist88

and the same to you sir. it just seems like you poured a lot of emotions and views into the piece. thatswhat im trying to do. i can rhyme/write anything i want to, but i might not feel it inside :( is all of your poetry dark, or is this it

RobinHood
2009-01-09, 04:47
Hey man, that is some heavy shit....