Here is some good shit...


see they call me uncle phil cuz they clowned on bel air
if totse people existed in real life everyone would stare
you speak of paper stack, while i live impoverished like 3rd world lands
in my dreams i fanticize of possesing hundreds in my hands
all i posses is this .38 and all i can do is contemplate
how i can make the ends on swo process initiate
riskin 25 to life and dodgin crooked ass cops
on top of that gotta worry about my own folks on tha down low dime drop
postin on totse when i think plot so a scheme i concoct
wit intentions of buyin an m-16 wit a folding stock
visions of demonic faces races late night my heart paces
i gotta dodge 9mm slugs just to fill my gut i bell wit blue laces
livin in the lanlocked west coast and every day is a struggle
not feelin alone when im on totse but knowin they wont believe stories about flash muzzle
bitches are scandalous and i just cant seem to find hoes i trust
when you dealin wit bitch as scandalous triccs keepin your game tight is a must

(chorus)cuz its a life others wanna live and you cant seem to escape
they wanna imitate us to the point where our identity is disgraced
fools thinkin we liein cuz the wannabees fuck this shit up
on a mutherfuccin buster i will immediately bust

see i spit this mutherfuckin shit knowin it strictly for totse
one time see i gave probable cause they thinkin they got me
i leave no clues not filin and pilin so one time quiccly stop smilin
im free on the street to see paper pilin and do some totse freestylin
im concoctin plots to pull liccs livin a scene in a movie
and trying to instigate ways to get me alotta pussy
homeboy fiendin for the wildhorse so shit gettin scandalous
borrow money from judge banks when i sentence you cant handle this
12 gauge blast late night its a bloody sight
one time unrollin tape under tha orange street light




(chorus)cuz its a life others wanna live and you cant seem to escape
they wanna imitate us to the point where our identity is disgraced
fools thinkin we liein cuz the wannabees fuck this shit up
on a mutherfuccin buster i will immediately bust

I can ask but one thing: lolwut? Troll, gtfo. If you be not a troll, then please take your 'work' elsewhere. I swear, it's hardly even legible. What fucking happened to grammar? Must I watch the English language fucking rot before my eyes? Just looking at it makes me sick, (by the way, you didn't even spell Kevorkian's name properly, nor did you even use his name in a proper context) because one ought take some fucking time to review their work so it at least looks decent (and comprehensible for that matter) to other human beings. If you can prove this to be of any worth, I beg you to prove me wrong by any/all means accessible to you.

I can ask but one thing: lolwut? Troll, gtfo. If you be not a troll, then please take your 'work' elsewhere. I swear, it's hardly even legible. What fucking happened to grammar? Must I watch the English language fucking rot before my eyes? Just looking at it makes me sick, (by the way, you didn't even spell Kevorkian's name properly, nor did you even use his name in a proper context) because one ought take some fucking time to review their work so it at least looks decent (and comprehensible for that matter) to other human beings. If you can prove this to be of any worth, I beg you to prove me wrong by any/all means accessible to you.

It sounds like you need a nap.


Also: uncle_phil has as much of a right to post his rhymes as you do to come off as a whiny prick. :)

It sounds like you need a nap.


Also: uncle_phil has as much of a right to post his rhymes as you do to come off as a whiny prick. :)


A shoddy work is a shoddy work, regardless of whether there be a right to post it or not. Personally, I would take the time to make sure what I am posting is at least grammatically correct.

Also: To being a whiny bitch will I assent, but my request still itself presents.

Being gramatically correct is not a requirement for this genere. Anyway, reading back a day later, it doesn't look that good. Read my post in DeliciousCrack's thread. That is some good shit.

I replaced the OP with a better song.

A shoddy work is a shoddy work, regardless of whether there be a right to post it or not. Personally, I would take the time to make sure what I am posting is at least grammatically correct.

Also: To being a whiny bitch will I assent, but my request still itself presents.

Constructive Criticism means don't be a prick about it.

I tried editing my post before it sent.

A shoddy work is a shoddy work, regardless of whether there be a right to post it or not. Personally, I would take the time to make sure what I am posting is at least grammatically correct.

Also: To being a whiny bitch will I assent, but my request still itself presents.

Each to their own.
What one finds to be of outstanding quality another will detest. This is an obvious fact. You might want to also consider the fact that it is a rap, which does not require a typical stanard of pronuciation and grammar. But please contiue with such posts if it makes you feel good to cut other's forms of self-expression down. That or perhaps make an active attempt to improve on the ever declining quality of the human language that will actually make a difference.

Might I suggest you read the description to this forum before you further attempt to post.

On a lighter note, feel free to hound people on other forums... like SG.

:)

Each to their own.
What one finds to be of outstanding quality another will detest. This is an obvious fact. You might want to also consider the fact that it is a rap, which does not require a typical standard of pronunciation and grammar. But please continue with such posts if it makes you feel good to cut others' forms of self-expression down. That or perhaps make an active attempt to improve on the ever declining quality of the human language that will actually make a difference.

Might I suggest you read the description to this forum before you further attempt to post.

On a lighter note, feel free to hound people on other forums... like SG.

:)

I would like to start off by thanking you for your kindness (alongside the nice touches of sarcasm) throughout my flaming. I would also like to personally apologize to Uncle_Phil. By the way, you were correct in detecting my tiredness that eve, and I will admit I do have a personal bias against the hip-hop/rap genre (btw for some high-flying rhymes, I personally would recommend Aesop Rock, Sage Francis, Dose-One, and basically the rest of the Anticon label). From now on I will do my best to keep my douchbaggery under wraps. Good eve to y'all.

I would like to start off by thanking you for your kindness (alongside the nice touches of sarcasm) throughout my flaming. I would also like to personally apologize to Uncle_Phil. By the way, you were correct in detecting my tiredness that eve, and I will admit I do have a personal bias against the hip-hop/rap genre (btw for some high-flying rhymes, I personally would recommend Aesop Rock, Sage Francis, Dose-One, and basically the rest of the Anticon label). From now on I will do my best to keep my douchbaggery under wraps. Good eve to y'all.

No, no, thank you.

I don't mind reading such things like your first post in other forums, considering how many people teh sux at english. It's just that I am vexed when it comes to negative criticism of one's own self-expression. Honestly, though, feel free to vent your "douchebaggery" in other forums though. I do and it's a nice way to vent. That and if you do it just right people will listen.

I think it's pretty awesome how level-headed you were about my response, most people wouldn't handle it that way. It's refreshing to be civil and discuss something instead of having a meaningless arguement.
Kudos to you.


And thank you for the suggestions in music, I shall have to check them out once I get the chance to.


Have a good one.

you have horrible flow.

I put you up on the IV, not the Roman Numeral 4
But the IV that leads to the funeral floor
Wax gets melted, breaks bones, fractures pelvics
Speeds through space and cracks blast astronaut helmets
Face it, muthafucka I could pay to get rid of you
I got more heads in the hood than pagan rituals
A new tyrannical force for you to fear
Known to kill and keep human ears as souvenirs
A shape shifter, face slitter, paper getter
Take your sister, rape your sister
Make your sister take it in the face
And if you're facin' us, block off a 30-block radius
I throw more blows than boxin' Dr. Octavius
It's the Army, we got power in numbers
And that's nines, four fives, three five sevens and m five hundreds

your flows come with percision wit the intent to overwhelm my vision
claimin your skills have risen to a point above where ill ever be livin
lyricall assasination retaliation from the west coast nation
you appear to be a skilled man but merely a fallen angel under satan
i commence the departation of the teflon consider youself gone
im axphyxiating busters not comin correct like you were ambushed wit orgone like vietnam
i got your escape route soaked slippery and tainted as you flee your destruction
i got you groanin from my blockade around your 30 block radius like bowell obstruction
see i launch projectiles like hamas got your setup under seige like the gaza strip
doa message containin drama sent to ya momma when your blood begin ta drip